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Empty by ~hotitallian:iconhotitallian:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


When there's nothing left
to live for
what do you do?
when nothing seems to help
and things never get better
do you..
curl up in a ball
and cry?
or crawl into a deep hole
and die?
When everyone's gone
and your the last one left
what do you do?
you have no one....
to see
to love
to be
it's over
there's nothing left
what should you do
pertending everything's alright
just doesn't work
eventually they find out
and they take you away
and you'll never come back
but you don't care
cause you have nothing left
to live for
©2005-2009 ~hotitallian
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Author's Comments

Um....I dunno just something I was thinkin about.

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!Nimrod77 Nov 13, 2005, 9:32:20 AM
that's really awesome:) favouritinggg right now haha

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Destiny is dead in the hands of bad luck.
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~hotitallian Nov 13, 2005, 9:42:05 AM
wow...really...thank you so much I wasn't sure if it was gonna be that good.

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~*~Take a shot not with a gun but with a thought~*~
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=elle-italic Nov 13, 2005, 9:43:01 AM
That was amazing. It's one of those poems that get you thinking and I like writings that do that. Well done!!!
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~sory Nov 13, 2005, 9:49:54 AM
wow, i really relate to this a lot. i know exactly what you are feeling. when you have so much pain in the core of your soal that it just shuts down. adolecence is such a bitch, but the good thing is that it doesnt last forever. just always write with all your heart like this, it is so beautiful.

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i love you
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~nuggetsgirl227 Nov 13, 2005, 10:19:30 AM
way to go, jessa. this is an awesome poem. awesome, but scary. I trust you to only think about this stuff and not act upon it, though, alright? remember...I'm just a call away. cause you tell me who is giving you hell and you now that in a heartbeat I would go kick their motherf*ckingass. not that I could, but I would try. luv ya chica! keep up the good work.

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one fish two fish red fish blue fish
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~Latestcraze Nov 13, 2005, 10:20:01 AM
Wow...wonderful, a little sad, but Wonderful!!

~~Portia~~
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~hotitallian Nov 13, 2005, 11:13:26 AM
thanx!:)

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~*~Take a shot not with a gun but with a thought~*~
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~hotitallian Nov 13, 2005, 11:15:30 AM
Yeah I know I wouldn't do anything stupid it's just somethin that came to my head last night at like two in the morning. Thanks for being there for me though.

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~*~Take a shot not with a gun but with a thought~*~
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~hotitallian Nov 13, 2005, 11:18:08 AM
thanks...yeah it really sux to feel like this but I guess there's nothin to do but keep going. Yeah being a teenager sucks but it also kicks ass cause there's not that much responsiblility. Thank you for the comment.

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~*~Take a shot not with a gun but with a thought~*~
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